One spaceship, twenty thousand frozen ponies, one unidentified malfunction
In Bay 3, Wing A lies a cryogenic pod. Inside, an unlikely hero, asleep for a hundred years.
Her time has come.
One spaceship, twenty thousand frozen ponies, one unidentified malfunction
In Bay 3, Wing A lies a cryogenic pod. Inside, an unlikely hero, asleep for a hundred years.
Her time has come.
Hmm, image of ship over... Horse head nebula? Oddly fitting.
EDIT:
Not bad, not bad at all. One quick tip though, you might want to italicize the sound effects to make them stand out, I read them as text and it's a little jarring; but that's up to you. Keep it up.
Great story, dude
This is... actually quite good.
I have the feeling that any questions that I may have at this point will be answered soonish in future chapters.
Please continue. You have my attention.
I foresee....a lot more dead corpses.....
Don't ask where I got that impression, just write whatever you wish.
It's only one possibility.
interesting
darn i thought she was going to have a new robot companion
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There's still three acts plus one chapter left
1253227 ok
Love the title man, Philip K Dick is my favorite author
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Good choice, even though I prefer Asimov myself